Tuesday, May 27, 2014

May 21, 2014




 MEMBERS PRESENT: Sharon Palmeri, Kathy Flotz, Suzy Stueben, Sharon Dorelli,Donna Douglass, Bob Moulesong,  Denise Taylor, Jackie Huppenthal, Luneil Morrow, Paul Mulligan Ruthann Graczyk, Michelle Vargas, Mary Ellen Beecher, Tom Molnar, Mike Musak, Neil Bedeker,  Beverly Stanislawski



 
Sharon Palmeri opened the meeting suggesting we forgo the usual updating the members’ news due to a very large attendance and limited reading time. Chapel Lawn mixed up our date with another group and did not expect us tonight. While they allowed us to meet, we had to leave by 8:15 p.m.

OLD BUSINESS
Minutes were approved by Donna Douglass, seconded by Bob Moulesong, with two corrections noted.

READINGS
Paul Mulligan continued reading from his work, Be Brave, Now Die. The part of Chapter 2 concerned the young couple meeting “the parents” and beginning to enjoy the growing love for each other.

Michelle Vargas (story still untitled) explained the use of a form to aid writers in creating protagonists and antagonists. There were columns to list their “goals and  behavior”  before their “vice” occurs, event that causes the characters a “moment of grace,” and “behavior after virtue practiced.” Many members found the form helpful.

Bob Moulesong is in the process of creating 13 short stories all centered around the names of the various full moons. The name of each  moon as well as the full moon itself plays a role in each story. The collection is to be titled, Lunacy.

Beverly Stanislawski  read her short story, “The Puzzle Pro.”  It told of a crossword puzzler and his accidental meeting with a man who appeared to be a real pro at finishing puzzles quickly, in ink. We learned that the pro wasn’t the wordsmith he pretended to be.

Donna Douglass’ offering, “A Woman’s Soliloquy” introduced us to a college girl and told of her growth into an older woman. Her life seemed filled with several personal, tragic episodes caused by a variety of people who wanted to hurt her, emotionally and physically. If people finally judge her, she wanted them to see the “real me.”

Suzy Stueben  read more of “Mrs. Walter’s New Neighbors.” This episode dealt with some strange, magical tea and some evil, hard choices Mrs. Walters had to make. All the time, she keeps trying to her special abilities secret and controlled.

Denise Taylor continued reading Chapter 2 “It’s Not Fair” from her work, All the Little Secrets. Sisters Kathy and Beth have angry words about Kathy eating “junk” food, especially in front of her. Being a diabetic, Beth is aware that she cannot eat that type of food. Her dad has to reprimand her about her attitude toward her sister and remind her to take her blood sugar test.

Sharon Dorelli  presented a part of her rather unique story, “The Hitchhikers.”
Charles doesn’t quite know what has happened to him as he awakens, but he “felt her presence.” Ana, who looked like an angel just might be a witch or something else. He wasn’t sure. As she seduced him, Charles began to die and felt himself fading into the void.

Neil Bedeker continued with Chapter 2 of his work, Early Retirement.  His character, Mitch Baden, thinks he was called to Principal Baxter’s office because of an inadvertent
Indiscretion. Instead, Baxter introduced him to FBI agent Berman. The agent wanted to know about Mitch’s association with radical Diana Dorn, 30 years ago at Woodstock.
Mitch hardly remembered her.  Now Dorn had escaped from prison, having sworn vengeance on another man for double-crossing her group. Would Mitch fit into the FBI’s plan?

Jackie Huppenthal read her poem, “Enough Already” which brought to everyone’s mind the damages that human kind has done to our world, “from the ocean floor to deep outer space” She asked us to be an advocate for our Earth, “do more than your share, be an example, and educate, so others will care.”

With the time limited, there were some members who did not get a chance to read. They will go first at our first June meeting: Tom Molar (Welcome back!), Mary Ellen Beecher, Ruthann Graczyk, and Mike Musak.

W.O.H. welcomed Sharon Dorelli back from her illness and presented her with a floral arrangement in a watering can.

Meeting was adjourned at 8:15 p.m.


Respectfully submitted,


Beverly Stanislawski




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