Wednesday, June 5, 2019

May 16, 2017


The Meeting began at 6:15 P.M.

MEMBERS PRESENT: 

Marilyn Kessler, Dennis Mclean, Tim Phillapart, Gail Galvan, Mike Ripley, Bev Stanislawski, Katherine Flotz, Caron Von See, Danielle Johnson, Heleni Qi, Sharon Palmeri, Al Koch, Amy Brailey, Diane Stratton, Shirley Vaughan, Corri Stephenson, Paila Stephenson, and John Hunt

OLD BUSINESS: 

A vote of approval for the May 2, 2019, minutes was first given by CARON VON SEE and seconded by KATHERINE FLOTZ.

NEW BUSINESS: 

No meeting on July 4!

A vote to keep the banquet in the spring was affirmed, and Al Koch recommended taking the banquet picture at the beginning so we don’t miss members who have to leave early.  Sharon Palmeri also recommended a holiday get together.

LITERARY NEWS: 

BEVERLY STANISLAWSKI received several awards for poems entered in the Oklahoma poetry contests.  Among those that placed were “Lonely Suitors,”  which received a Third place; “Frost’s Footprints” and “Long Song” which received Third Honorable Mention; “Loving You” was awarded a First Honorable Mention as was “Captain and Lady”; finally, “Husband’s Love” and “My Dad, the Farmer” gained a Second Honorable Mention.  Congratulations, Beverly!

AL KOCH shared that his book is currently in progress, albeit having issues with Technical Publishing Elements.  We all eagerly anticipate it being complete. 


READINGS:

GAIL GALVAN read her poem entitled “Super Moonlit Ride Home,” composed in admiration for the beautiful moon on her way home from last month’s meeting.

AL KOCH shared “Remembering Mrs. Harmon.” In this memoir about a childhood experience, a child works diligently for a neighbor and is rewarded with not just the usual pay, but also a treasured gift, which allows him to learn many valuable lessons.

MARILYN KESSLER read “The Red Germanium” based off the writing prompt posted on the Write On Hoosiers site.  In this version, an older couple is vacationing in a resort area of Florida.  While they are gone, after hearing all the wonderful things about their new location, their kids and grandchildren remodeled their home.  Now, they have to decide whether to stay or go.

DENNIS MCLEAN read the first four pages (Prologue and beginning of Chapter 1) from The Eye of the Gift Horse in which we are introduced to the main family in the story:  Grandma Alice, mom, dad, Sidney, and Maddie.  In this scene, they are late to the house because the dad couldn’t find his keys.  We learn that Grandma Alice helps balance Sidney’s behaviors.

TIM PHILLIPART read four free verse poems.  The first, “When Writer’s Block Breaks” compares the feeling to a fish coming off the hook to arrive back in the water.  “Cure for the Tepid” explores what would happen if the moon was really the stopper of a tub and it were possible to get sucked out into the sky with the retreating water.  “I Write the Check” expressed the feelings we experience when a friend tree has to be cut down.  Finally, “Master” plays with the idea of who really is the master in the person-dog relationship.

BEVERLY STANISLAWSKI  in her poignant poem “Homecoming,” perfectly captures the feelings one experiences when returning to a childhood home only to be confronted with all the differences between the current reality and the memories one has in a place.

SHIRLEY VAUGHAN continued reading Chapter 1 Tarueus from her novel entitled The Path of Their Existence.  In this section, we receive introductions to several main characters, both the military members who are flying back to base and two couples who are watching a band perform.

JOHN HUNT shared pp. 9-12 of The Sparrow’s Sad Song.  In this section, Ryan wakes up in the hospital where they are getting ready to take Caity out to airlift her.  He makes sure to apologize for the words he said before she is taken away. 

CARON VON SEE read the Conclusion of Chapter 13 of My Treasure Chest.  In this section, Sara and Antonio discuss Sara’s meeting the ghost of Antonio’s aunt.  He’s trying to help her make sense of what happened in the attic and what they can do to court the favor of this ghost and calm his wife’s fears. 

MIKE RIPLEY read the start of Chapter 1 of A Higher Self, which her wrote after seeing a gallery image of a woman made by overlapping images.  He began to wrestle with the concept of what it means to become your higher self and where all that you shed in the process goes. In this chapter, we are introduced to John and Jody who live on a 6th floor apartment in Chicago.  Jody has walked home in the driving rain, despite her rheumatoid arthritis.  John gets home soon after, having taken a cab.  Jody is considering a trip to California to see her parents.   

DANIELLE JOHNSON read a section of Chapter 2 of her book Love, Death, and Socialism.  In this section, students are broken into groups to do a project on other countries in the Soviet Union.  The group we are observing contains a party member’s son, a shy girl, a quiet boy, and an anti-party girl. 

HELENA QI read a speech script entitled “While Waiting” reminiscent of John Milton’s line in “When I consider How My Light is Spent” which states, “They also serve who only stand and wait.”  In this speech, she describes the process of moving from a church disbanding to the process of waiting to re-establish fellowship.  She also reminds that like Old Man Sai, we cannot always decide what is good or bad initially. 

The Meeting Adjourned at 8:30 P.M.

Respectfully submitted by Amy Brailey 

Saturday, May 11, 2019

May 2, 2019


The Meeting began at 6:07 P.M.

MEMBERS PRESENT: 

Sharon Buckman, Hardarshan Valia, Shirley Vaughan, Mike Ripley, John Hunt, Tim Phillapart, Ruthann Graczyk, Marilyn Kessler, Diane Stratton, Bob Philpot, Katherine Flotz, Sharon Palmeri, and Amy Brailey

VISITORS:  Joe Perz, Ray Guiden, and Dennis Mclean

Miss Brailey’s students:  Diomara Fleming, Dante Susko, Jordan Vernon, Madison Sharp, Savanna Kerekes, Alisha Roberts, and Zoe Staples.

OLD BUSINESS: 

A vote of approval for the April 18, 2019, minutes was first given by RUTHANN GRACZYK and seconded by KATHERINE FLOTZ.

NEW BUSINESS: 

Gloria McMillan, author of Children of Steel is seeking fiction stories from those who grew up in a steel mill town.  Al Koch, Pete Joseph, and Hardarshan Valia will be featured in it.  Gloria is a possible future speaker for our group. 

Gordon Wilder, a 90 year old author was looking for someone to help critique his story, as he has no way to and from meetings.  E-mail writeonhoosiers@comcast.net for his e-mail address.


LITERARY NEWS: 

READINGS:

MISS BRAILEY’S STUDENTS’  READINGS:

JORDAN VERNON read Chapter 1 of her novel entitled Dull.  In this section, two detectives have a strange encounter in the basement of a murder scene.

DANTE SUSKO read the beginning of his novel Fire Throughout the Night, the story of an the beginning of an epic battle between two kingdoms.

DIOMARA FLEMING read a Preview to her comic story.  In it, she introduces her main characters Carter and Moonstone.


MEMBERS’ READINGS:

HARDARSHAN VALIA presented his reflection on the recent series of attacks on places of worship in the form of a poem entitled “On Sacred Grounds.” 

JOHN HUNT shared a continuation of The Sparrow’s Sad Song.  In this section, Ryan is looking for Caity, who had left him.  When he discovers her, she is unconscious.  He tries to carry her to safety, and makes it to the lights before collapsing.

AMY BRAILEY read “The Box of Predictions,” a short story based on Tim Phillapart’s poem by the same name shared last week.  In it, young Timmy goes to the auction of the apothecary and purchases a Box of Predictions.

TIM PHILLIPART read four free verse poems.  The first and second were two versions of commentary on the invincibility and fear of being “Seventeen.”  “Woonsery Station” takes a whimsical look at imagination while “A Near Life Experience” looks at those times in reality when we feel the most truly alive. 

MIKE RIPLEY read “A Moment on the Lake” which takes a poetic prose approach to the experience of being on the lake.  “Rhea” looks at the constancy of a waitress the customers have come to rely on to improve their mood, not realizing she carries her own struggles.  “Dites-moi” (Tell me why) personifies the experience of your children growing up and moving on.

DIANE STRATTON read “Go to the Hospital” a fun look at the experiences General Hospital has brought to her life (and her family’s) over the years.  If you’re in need of encouragement, Go to the Hospital.

RUTHANN GRACZYK shared a memoir in tribute to her cousin’s husband Bob who just passed away on April 13, 2019.  The local Memorial Service was held on Saturday, April 27, at Chapel Lawn in Schererville.  Our thoughts and prayers are with Mary Ellen (a member of Write On, Hoosiers) as she is far from home and family and now working through the start of a new season. 

BOB PHILPOT read Chapter 1 Double Desert from his novel Strange Friend.  Zeb is out hunting deer when he stumbles upon a crook and a sheriff.  He is yet unseen and now has to decide how much to involve himself. 

SHIRLEY VAUGHAN read Chapter 1 “Tarueus” from her novel entitled The Path of Their Existence.  In this section, which takes place in a futuristic New York, a young hacker decides to give the military something to practice on without realizing they will retaliate against perceived threats. 

The Meeting Adjourned at 8:30 P.M.

Respectfully submitted by Amy Brailey